Aug. 30, 2018, critique

Praises The dominant art on Page 1 by Cris was beautiful and eye-catching. Your extra effort paid off. In general, the editing was cleaner than the previous issue. Best photo Again, nice job, Cris. This is the best photo in the paper and kudos to who decided to put it on Page 1. Best lead…

Aug. 27, 2018, critique

Praises This was a wonderful first paper. Praises go to the entire staff. No, it wasn’t perfect, but this is a great start. The design shows an execution of fundamentals. Not only do you know the basics of page design, you can put these ideas to use. The writing was solid throughout. I didn’t find…

June 25, 2018, critique

Praises Ginger’s “Jurassic World” is smart and an interesting read. Well done! Photo of the week None stands out. Best lead None stands out. Best headline ‘Roseanne’ without Barr It’s clever, clear and compelling. Problems Photo placement in story: Make sure to anchor photos at the top of the story under the headline as shown…

July 30, 2018, critique

Praises After being incorrect the previous week, we’re back to correctly heralding “The Truth Shall Bear All Light.” Thanks for your attention to detail to make sure this is correct. I enjoyed the local focus in Sports. In know this is hard to do in the summer, but you found a way to find compelling…